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[Arzea]

I'm so glad to be one of the first people to write a review for this :D

This game is fun. INSANE fun. I played for about one hour but I got wrist cramp because, I'm lame. Anyway, some things I noted that other people have commented on.

When you click on the map button, there's no way to get out of it except by pressing (As you said yourself below) the esc or M key. That breaks immersion, I doubt it'd be hard to make a little clickable X button at the top right, or make it so if you click on the map it disappears.

Boss music. It's okay (The entire musical score is wanting to be a little bit quieter and more BGish, though it's really not bad at all) but my issue mostly is with the awkward transitioning. You need to either add a fade-in before the boss, or make the fade-in, if it's there, slower. It's like laadeedeedBAWMBAWMBAWMBEEDLEYBEWWW and startled me slightly. I was like... WHAT DID I DO WRONG?!

Also, did you seriously make the big portion of this in only 48 hours? Where can I find the original?

arkeus responds:

Thanks for the comments! You can find the original competition version at http://projects.iarke.us/arzea/

[Kakashi Dating Game]

Eww

Shinra looks cute. That is possibly the only positive thing I can say about this. Having played at least a few dating sims, this is a really amateur effort. The dialogue is awkward, at best. The choices are only two per option, and I dunno if it follows the entire Naruto storyline or not (I prefer the original series and haven't watched the new one yet) but if this is a realistic interpretation of Kakashi, he is a self-righteous arrogant asshole.

Maybe next time, bro.

TeamShinra responds:

The reason that this is amateur effort, is probably because I am still an amateur at this point, yet hoping to improve.
It doesn't really follow the Naruto storyline, more a story I wrote [which is mentioned at the beginning].
About Kakashi's personality; you don't really see the young version too much, so most of his personality back then is guessed. However, from the times you do see him, it's pretty easy to see that he has a certain degree of arrogance, which is why I kept that in his dialogue.

Thank you for your honest review, though ^^